I think that Anne Lamont's advice in "Shitty First Drafts" was very interesting. I feel like she was describing me because every time that I have to write an essay I have not idea where to start. However her idea to just sit down and write everything that come to your mind can help you to find the right track. Well actually that is what I did today when I was writing my essay at first I did not what to put but then I start writing different things about my topic and suddenly I got 3 pages. Now I just have to go over again and review like she said i just my first draft.
Well I think that Student A did I good job in his essay. I really like the way how he summarize Johnson article and how he also used some shows to prove his point an argument against his article about TV makes you smarter.
How
does it differ from your
usual drafting style?
What one thing do you think the student writer from the sample essay did
very well? Why? What one thing do you think the student writer needed to
work on? Why?
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